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Doomsday lineartby *emmshin

Fan Art / Traditional Art / Drawings / Books & Novels

My Fanart Lineart: DC Comics (c) "Doomsday"

My first artwork for the 2013, what a great way to start the year with a Doomsday. . .artwork

Hope you like it, have a great year 2013..
Please feel free to check out my gallery.. thank you!

previously on my gallery:

Critique by ~RHSlaughter Jan 4, 2013, 12:52:37 AM

You've done a good job displaying medium values, but it needs darker tones. Also, instead of an outline for the entire character, try having variable dynamic lines that make things pop that should be in the foreground to create more depth. His right arm and left leg should have bolder outlines if you chose to have them, while the ones in the background should have thinner yet still noticeable lines. Same thing with your pen or pencil strokes. The farther away, the broader and less detailed they should be. Otherwise then the lack of depth you have done a good job.

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